1 - Plot - Week 2 - what is structure

Instructions from coursera:

Write a very short story - not more than 200 words - about a trip to the doctor or dentist using the ABDCE structure. Identify the structural elements in your story. My example is provided below:

One night when I was eight years old I opened a bag of Doritos to eat while watching television. (A) Doritos were my favorite snack to eat as a child. Nacho Cheese was my favorite flavor. (B) I loved sitting in the dark hearing the “crunch, crunch, crunch” of the chips. I’d sit there, crunching my chips, but didn’t eat the chips with a napkin (what kid does?) and would forget about the powder that accumulated on my fingertips. As it got later and I got sleepier, I kept rubbing my eyes, my fingertips covered in Doritos Nacho Cheese powder. (D) When it was time for bed, I went to brush my teeth, looked in the mirror, and saw two large bags under my eyes. The Doritos Nacho Cheese powder had pooled into two large sacks underneath my eyeballs. I started screaming and crying. (C) The next day, my grandmother took me to the doctor who put industrial strength eye drops into my eyes to flush out the powder. (E)

Remember, the action in this story isn’t the actual doctor’s office visit. The action is what LEADS you to the doctor’s office.  

TITLE: It really hurt down there

(A)  I went to bed at noon and throw myself in, leading to crush my privates’ parts.

(B)  We were on the pandemic, so I had several months working from home like and very fast I got just to take a nap at the middle of the workday.

(D)The room was very dark, and I was just tired of hearing my boss talk, so when I throw myself at the bed I fall in a weird position and what I think was inner leg crash that little part of me. I scream from the pain, but I knew that will be just a few minutes of hurting and will be it. I was so wrong. The day went by, and the ache came and went.

(C)  Close to midnight I feel like if it was twisted a feeling impossible to describe, but when you know, you know. I call the doctor and his instructions were clear “GO TO ER”. He explains that depending on what is happening and due so many hours it could be surgical.

(E)  I hug my pregnant wife and exactly at 0015 I got in the car for me to go the hospital. Thank fully I was scanned and review by a specialist and it was just an inflammation.