Create a scene (700-1000 words) with at least three characters. Two of these characters should have different viewpoints on the world; one should be an “insider” in the world you’re creating, and one should be an outsider. For example, you could set the scene in your country and have one person be native and one be a foreign visitor. The third character should be an eavesdropper on a conversation between the first two. Construct the story using no more than three speech tags (a speech tag is something that identifies a speaker, like "she said" and "Kevin replied"); instead, use the setting, descriptions, and idiosyncrasies to make the speakers identifiable. Be careful, however, to avoid caricature.
***Respond to the following question and include your response in your assignment submission. Additionally, take into consideration your peers' response to the following question while completing peer reviews of their work.
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Welcome back and as all of you know Team Alligator has just loose against team Bravos. I am David your host and we have two master’s on the field. One is a world champion Josue Torres and the other one is my very good friend and an incredible analyst Ian Cooper.
—Thank you, David. I have played against bravos many times while I was a young boy and even at the end of my career and the philosophy and qualities of the team had always been an aggressive approach.
—This is not a Bravos Win, this is an alligator loose.
—Gentleman, we need to focus. What Bravos did right?
—In my experience Bravos at the first time, did not loose the breath. They defend and second time they risk everything. This strategy maintains the breath of the offenders. The bad part was that the first half the goal keepers and defenders were very tired.
—As an analyst I can tell you that while the strategy of the technician of Bravos was risky. At beginning the team was losing 1-0. The big mistake made by Alligator is that they went back. They got the 1-0 at the end of the first time and decided to pass to defend. The technician plays a strategy that only two men in the front and searching for the goal. Which by this time is what not a priority. While the Bravos decided for a strategy in which they have three men in the front line.
—Josue and Ian. Please let me stop you because we have a sponsor announcement to tell. If you are tired of bad loses when you put money on a game. We recommend the twitter account “Mastering the game”. Mastering the game is an AI startup that provides intel regarding soccer, American football, and NBA. Now back to you Josue.
—As I was explaining the strategy proposed by the coach of Bravos was great. By gaining this game they are now in the second position of the general table and unfortunately the leader who was Crocodile go down to the third place.
—Like all soccer players you missed the great win by the Leon heart team. That gave them enough points to go from second to the first position. The reality is that this season is going to be of Leon team.
—Gentleman, gentleman please. We need to explain the audience how does the win of Leon team affect. Please dear friend, you have always been a big fan of Leon team.
—The Leon team this season have a great team.. —I could defeat them with a bunch of kids. — Do you want a fight pretty boy? —I am not scared of you, piece of trash —Gentleman, gentleman. Please. We need to mediate our differences. I am sick and tired that all the commentators and TV host are always the same. They fight among themselves. —So, we are going to do the next. Please each one of you will talk about how their own inside world is and sees the other world of the other from outside. —Being a soccer player is complicated and is a mess. The fans, the coach, the teammates, everybody is looking for different contracts. Then social media arrive, and good players have bad social media and bad players were great at social media. This generates that budget of rehiring or sales affected. Because if you were a decent player but a great social media. It was easier to recover the money invested. In case if you were a bad player and a bad social media, you do not have achieve, but there were terrible players that were undisciplined, but the fans and social media loves them. The directive will think twice to sale. I was one the MVP of the season and achieve a champion for my team back at Spain and I explained to the team. I do not want to go, I want to retire in this team.
Then a Chinese team arrive and through brides and suitcase full of cash I suddenly was playing in the Chinese tournament. When you are a kid or teenage, everybody dreams to become a great sports icon, but after you achieve it. The sensation is the worse. There is money, but if the team does not have a proper strategy, you cannot make a strategy of your own. I understand what happened with our friends at Bravos. There is not a proper line to follow their coach is terrified that several of their starts are criticized for a bad game and affect his stay at the team. He pulled off the match.
Then we have these terrible people that are the sport analyst which inflate normal players because someone told them. I have seen better players than what this idiots “experts” on “soccer” can actually think of.
—Unfortunately that is all time we have for today. I am David he was Josue and next to me Ian. See you tomorrow.
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